(This is a descriptive paragraph written by one of my students in a writing class. This is in response to the subject "how the houses in the future look like." You, too, can imagine how the houses in the future will look like and try to develop a paragraph about it, or improve the paragraph below.)
Houses never fail to capture my interest. I have always been fascinated with houses. I believe that houses in the future will be highly technological yet still offer the comforts of home. Houses will be either white or silver with chrome trimmings. Doors will be activated by retina or hand scan. Once you enter the house, things will be voice activated like lights, TV, microwave oven and other appliances. These houses do not have stairs or elevators, instead they will have teleportation docks to get to the other floors of the house. The walls and ceilings can instantly change their color as they are activated by your moods. How i wish to be in this kind of house. I hope when i am already stable, this is already the kind of house where people live.
(Dennis Moraga)
1 comment:
wow
thats a high-tech house
but its kinda weird if colors of its walls and ceiling change as your mood changes.
i wouldnt like that.
it might somehow become a scary house.
technology arent reliable, it requires electricity and computerization im sure.
and too much convenience makes us feel lazy and sick.
DO I MAKE SENSE?
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